poem mastery lvl1
Sunday, April 29, 2007
heres one of my first poems… actually i did some minor changes last nyt coz some words just don't seem ryt… but i tried to keep the changes as small as i can so the emotions of the piece will still be the same… i wrote this when i was in second year high school… it's actually inspired by my ex-classmate, ex-crush Christine V… well wherever you are ryt now… youre there… hahaha… do you expect me to say something?… well anyway… Jebsen want to say hi… hahaha… i think i have to shut my mouth now…
i know that this is not right
'cause i'll just make a suicide
'cause you are on heaven
and i am in hell
we are thousand miles apart
evrytime i tried to get close to you
it feels like you're getting more far from me
i'll write the greatest poem
just to be with you
but i know there's nothing i can do
for me to get close to you
i'm not surrendering in this battle
but i'm not asking you to love me too
i'm just asking for a smile or two
there you go… i told you i'm not that good… hahaha… bye bye…
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